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Love is not very many things;

Love is not definable;
unconstrained by words
the waft and weave of language
leave her untouched and unchanged,
slide their supple nooses and nuances
around her neck, but fail to tie the knot.

Love is not rational;
unchained from reason
she runs free through fields
and moonlit groves in our imagination,
planting the dissenting seeds
that will grow into the ruling bowers of our minds.  

Love is not defensible;
unassailable, what wants she for defence?
How could we shatter that high tower,
her ivory staircase where above all mortal sense
she sits on throne? How then can we defend her;
bereft of reason, she wants no defence, and begets none.

Love is not something one can deal with;
taking our hands,
she leads us in her dance,
and stumbling in our one-step two-step motions,
we are caught up altogether. She spins us on our heels,
and if we are lucky, she won't ever let us stop.

Love is not caught in those thousand little moments,
not tied to those thousand little acts,
not wrapped in those million little lives she dances through -
love is not very many things.

Love is not very many things, and yet -
there she is.
©2005-2009 ~Holy-Mecha
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Not an original idea I'm certain, and not an original topic. However, it hasn't been too long since I read Plato's Symposium (read it!) which has some amazingly imaginative depictions of love, and I've been thinking about the subject a lot lately. So - voila.

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:iconguitarphotogrphr:
wow... seriously awesome... I can't really explain what draws me to it, but I love it. Excellent!

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Kill a man, you are a murderer. Kill millions of men, you are a conqueror. Kill all, you are a god.

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Thank you, very kind :)

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I like the ending :)

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'your shoulder blades will ache for want of wings'
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Yeah, isn't it just sickly sweet enough to make you choke on your bisto?

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I like this one, alot! :+fav:

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Thankees :D Did you come here from Penslinger, though? I'd suggest looking at his stuff rather than mine, its all a loooot better

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I tried reading one of his, but I got confused by it. I wasn't sure what he was saying. Though I usually like that stuff, I couldn't decide on whether I liked it or not.

Maybe my problem was that I was near-dead tired at the time. Meh.

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Heh, I can appreicate. Trawling DA at 3.00 am, poems suddenly stop being words and start being pretty llumps on the page...

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Naw. They stop being still. Plus they transform into new words by means of fusion. ;)

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